Microscopic
He is very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very tiny and very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very strong
His eyes look Royal blue
He smells like a Skunk
Runs as fast a cheater and runs like a ninja
He feels a bite ferry
He carries a phone and a pack of crayons
His voice Is as squeaky as a mouse
He says “yes and no”
hi seth its dylan here I love your story its amzing.next time don´t put
ReplyDeleteto much very we no he strong but that much verys by dylan 🤩
Hi �� Seth like how you used a simile.What is a microscopic ?
ReplyDeleteits a very small thing
DeleteHi Seth my name is Patrick I Liked the way you how you used very a lot bye ��
ReplyDeletethanks i will next time
DeleteHey Seth Kristian here maybe not adding so much verys next time. Just a suggestion. Kristian
ReplyDeleteOut. PEACE!
thank you
Deletehi
ReplyDeletehi i like the start where it say he is very strong and tiny
ReplyDeletehi Seth it's me Levi.i really like how you are described this character as really strong and his blue eyes. Maybe you could add more to what he looks like and add more description to the characters eyes and what it is.this character reminds me of my uncle he is fast and strong almost like how your character is.
ReplyDeleteok i will ad more
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